Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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notion is different from each other.It

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that it is better to accept worse situations

such

as unsatisfying job

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or monetary problems.While others disagree and agree that it would be better to try hard,to enhance these issues.I opine that

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view is

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than the former.In

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I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

To begin

with,there are

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of reasons why people opt

for

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to undergo bad situations as they know how to solve the matters,

however

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they think doing so is not in their own hands.

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,research indicates that 45% of

masses

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always live

on

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under threat that they admit

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punishment is from God.

Therefore

,they agree and tend to accept what is happening in their life.

On the other hand

,more people tend to alter their current position into successful life

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.

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they want to encourage themselves to be in a great future.

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,take the

ceo

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CEO

of Apple(Bill Gates)as an example.He

first

not happy but with his great

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,he did hard work and established his own company.

Additionally

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this

gave him

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powerful success

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and was admitted

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of the most popular business

leader

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with high incomes.That's why many supporters opine that bad regulations are not superior as well. To conclude,I would say different masses have

another notions

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which never

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each other.But as far as I'm concerned person who lives under challenging circumstances,

he

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will achieve better results.