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You need to organize an office event in a community center.Write a letter to the center. In your letter request you to provide the following information to us

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to as enquire about the booking details for your community centre in Park Avenue 3rd Lane. I am an event coordinator for IBM Corporation. Our company has
the
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 plan to provide a digital literacy workshop for the public.
This
 program is a part of our corporate social responsibility program. we are planning to have the workshop on 30th March
,
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 2023. I searched on your website about the capacity and facilities of the Vene, and it is sufficient for our requirements. We would like to know the availability of the above-mentioned date and the rent details. As you are not providing the food, we will arrange the dinner with any local restaurant and it will be served in your buffet hall. we are expecting a maximum of sixty people in the workshop. I would
also
 like to enquire about the parking facilities of your community centre. We reserved some of the seats for physically disabled people. I would like to ask about the facilities for those people
also
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Jennifer
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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