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With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be . Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it

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With
divorce
 rates and family breakdowns increasing globally it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be . Discuss the causes of
this
 problem and offer some possible solutions to it. In recent times
divorce
 rates and separations are increasingly growing in the world. As
the
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a
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 result of
this
 families nowadays are moving away from each other compared to previous times . In
this
essay
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 I will discuss the causes
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of these
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these phenomenon
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this phenomenon
these phenomena
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 and provide
few
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a few
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 options to overcome
it
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them
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.
First
 of all
this
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these
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days
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 the majority of couples expect each other lot of things .
For instance
 , family
each
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apply
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member gas work
that
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the
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 children's fathers and mothers . After
this
 phenomenon comes up one question
that
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who
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which
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 mother or father
take
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takes
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 care
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of then
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then
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the
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 children or infant
.
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?
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 Who will cook
thier
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their
the
 dinner
.
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Then
 they do not have that understanding partners .
This
 is
reason
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the reason
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 they can not agree .
In addition
 that another important reason is
another important reason is
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other families
not
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do not
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enough
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have enough
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 financial source .
Although
husband
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the husband
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don't
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doesn't
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 have financial resource . He can not supply his
spouse
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spouse's
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 necessity .
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example
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 if his wife
want
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wants
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 to buy something
then
 he
don
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dons
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 not have money . After
this
eventmay
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event may
come
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comes
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to
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apply
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divorce
 . The above examples detail some of the causes due to which people do not wish to live in a relationship. There are two effective solutions to surmount
this
divorce
 problem.
On
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One
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 way to tackle
this
 is to go for a
pre -marriage
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pre-marriage
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counseling
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counselling
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there
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their
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 psychologist can help people and explain the nitty gritty of marriage. It will
also
 help
this people
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this person
these people
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 to easily understand each other .
Similarly
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marriage
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married
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 couples can
also
 take help by means of marriage
counseling
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counselling
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 and give a
second
 chance to their troubled relationship. The other way is to talk openly with the partner without any prejudice regularly.
As a result
 by following above mentioned approaches both partners understand each other better and can try to live happily. By way of
conclusion
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 I once again reaffirm
position
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my position
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 that family breakdowns are caused by
the
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a
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 plethora of
expectation
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expectations
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 and couples can take help from
psychologist
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a psychologist
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 who can help them to understand each other better and live happily
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