With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be . Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it
With
divorce
rates and family breakdowns increasing globally it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be . Discuss the causes of this
problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
In recent times divorce
rates and separations are increasingly growing in the world. As the
result of Correct article usage
a
this
families nowadays are moving away from each other compared to previous times . In this
essay
I will discuss the causes Add a comma
,essay
Change preposition
of these
these phenomenon
and provide Change the determiner
this phenomenon
these phenomena
few
options to overcome Correct article usage
a few
it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
First
of all this
Change the determiner
these
days
the majority of couples expect each other lot of things . Add a comma
,days
For instance
, family each
member gas work Correct determiner usage
apply
that
children's fathers and mothers . After Correct determiner usage
the
this
phenomenon comes up one question that
Correct word choice
apply
who
mother or father Correct pronoun usage
which
take
care Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
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of then
then
children or infantCorrect your spelling
the
.
Who will cook Change the punctuation
?
thier
dinnerCorrect your spelling
their
the
.
Change the punctuation
?
Then
they do not have that understanding partners .This
is reason
they can not agree . Add an article
the reason
a reason
In addition
that another important reason is another important reason is
other families Remove the redundancy
apply
not
Add a missing verb
do not
enough
financial source . Add a missing verb
have enough
Although
husband
Correct article usage
the husband
don't
have financial resource . He can not supply his Change the verb form
doesn't
spouse
necessity . Change noun form
spouse's
For
example
if his wife Add a comma
,example
want
to buy something Change the verb form
wants
then
he don
not have money . After Change the verb form
dons
this
eventmay
Correct your spelling
event may
come
Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
to
Change preposition
apply
divorce
. The above examples detail some of the causes due to which people do not wish to live in a relationship.
There are two effective solutions to surmount this
divorce
problem. On
way to tackle Correct your spelling
One
this
is to go for a pre -marriage
Add a hyphen
pre-marriage
counseling
Change the spelling
counselling
there
psychologist can help people and explain the nitty gritty of marriage. It will Replace the word
their
also
help this people
to easily understand each other . Change the determiner
this person
these people
Similarly
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,Similarly
marriage
couples can Replace the word
married
also
take help by means of marriage counseling
and give a Change the spelling
counselling
second
chance to their troubled relationship. The other way is to talk openly with the partner without any prejudice regularly. As a result
by following above mentioned approaches both partners understand each other better and can try to live happily. By way of conclusion
I once again reaffirm Add a comma
,conclusion
position
that family breakdowns are caused by Correct pronoun usage
my position
the
plethora of Correct article usage
a
expectation
and couples can take help from Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
psychologist
who can help them to understand each other better and live happilyAdd an article
a psychologist
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