World would be a better place if women own the leadership. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

Leadership involves some qualities like knowledge

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and experience. Some people argue that when females take

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ownership the

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world can become the best platform. I completely agree with

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To begin

with, the factors why women's leadership can be beneficial. If a female becomes a leader

then

they may

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about the girl's safety.

Thus

many women step forward to become independent, stand on their feet and start doing jobs.

For example

, in earlier times women were only restricted to their household chores but nowadays they are doing jobs like mates. As many females started doing work in all fields, it boosts

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confidence among others as well.

Consequently

, it brings a positive change in society. Moving

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, Leadership is not limited to gender as well

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outer strength,

however

, it depends on the inner ability to do the work effectively.

For instance

, in today's time, a female is equally standby with a man and

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she is in every profession,

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as doctor, lawyer, politician and teacher.

Also

, a female is balancing both personal and professional life in an efficient way.

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, a

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can take decisions by keeping in mind people's necessities and emotions.

As a result

, she is the one who knows how to perform work in a better way. In conclusion,

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some people disagree about the woman be as an owner

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believe that she can run an empire like a family by fulfilling all the responsibilities.