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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
With the advance in technology and high innovation nowadays, living
in
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daily life is easier than
the
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 age before the revolution of science.
This
 could make some people think that communication and learning
language
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 is not important as
it
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use
 to be in the past. I am
total
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 agreed with the sentence that learning
language
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 is
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a benefit
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benefit
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.
First
 of all,
communicate
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 without using helping tools can sense the feeling during speaking more than
use
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 translation software. Using the device making
time
 to progress by the device have to record the sound and
then
 translate
to
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 the listener but if you can
speaking
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 on your own you can adjust the
volumn
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volume
 by
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a decrease
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decrease
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 or
increase
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 them to make it more
emotion
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. Another point is the device is not with you all the
time
 or I can
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 it is not available for you all the
time
. Some areas can not access
to
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the internet for the software to be ready to
use
. In some
time
, an accident can cause you can not
use
 all these tools during having
conversation
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a conversation
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.
As a result
, learning
language
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 is more
benefit
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 and can get you ready for
time
 to chat all the
time
. Not just that, learning
language
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a language
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 is helping
brain
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the brain
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developing
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. Like people said make
time
 to learn
new
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language
 and your brain will not stop learning too. Even
there
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 are many ways to communicate without knowing their
language
 but
practicing
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 and
be
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being
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 ready to
speaking
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speak
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 is still
usefull
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useful
 for living.
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