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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why is it happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#rubbish #government #amount #answers
World
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 population
nowdays
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nowadays
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 is getting bigger and
the
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environment
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environmental
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 pollution
also
 increasing
for
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no doubt.
Everyday
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 we are producing
waste
 more than we recycle it.
This
 essay will discuss more
about
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this
 issue.
Firstly
,
waste
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the waste
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 that we produce
everyday it
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every day is
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 not only water, fossil fuel and air pollution. The biggest source is rubbish that everyone in
this
world
 produces. The main course of it is all our uses is from not recycled material.
For instance
, plastic bottles, takeaway cups or bowls, and ceramic and all
this
 material is cannot be recycled.
Furthermore
, all
this act
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these acts
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 can be changed only by humans
itself
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themselves
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.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
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 should take an action
for
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on
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this
 matter seriously. The
goverment
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government
 should educate the citizen
how
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on how
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 important to reduce
the
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waste
 and make awareness
to
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among
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 all
people
.
For example
, put the advertisement in newspaper and television.
In addition
, put more recycling
bin
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bins
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at
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in
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 all the areas of houses.
Such
 as
,
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my
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in my
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 own experience in my house area they only provide only three bins for 1 region and because of
this
people
 choose only to use the regular
waste
 bin. In my conclusion, government and
people
 should together reduce
the
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waste
 in order to make our
world
 less
pollution
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polluted
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.
This
 will save our
world
 for all the
people
 and the
next
 generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • non-biodegradable
  • waste management
  • recycling initiatives
  • consumerism
  • disposable products
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • biodegradable materials
  • circular economy
  • carbon footprint
  • landfill overflow
  • reduce, reuse, recycle
  • waste reduction strategies
  • environmental legislation
  • green technologies
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