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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.

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Nowadays, In
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 modern world, the majority of the population worked hard all day and they have no
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 to do any type of exercise.
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, they have to face serious health issues in the form of sickness or other illnesses. As the world progresses day by day, needs and necessities are
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 increasing consistently. Due to the busy schedule of the masses, nobody has enough
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 for a workout.
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, the offices are
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 not supportive of employees in the matter of their health maintenance.
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, a person who works in a bank from 9.am to 5 pm surely does have not sufficient
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 for exercise and he has to face health problems as the result.
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, there are numerous solutions to cope with these prevailing circumstances. To mitigate
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 issue, private companies and governmental bodies should make flexible setup of working hours. There must be 45 min given to workers for their leisure activities. Break in any work schedule is a key to healthy life physically as well as mentally. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that there is a great hustle and bustle in
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 world and a lot of competition between people to raise their standard of living, exercise is inevitable and no one can deny its importance. The offices and the government must consider
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 for workouts in their working calendar.
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