. World would be a better place if women own the leadership. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

A leadership

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involves some qualities like knowledge,

experience

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and experience

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. Some people argue that when females take

the

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ownership

then

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world

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can become the best platform. I completely agree with

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opinion. In

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essay,

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viewpoint followed by a conclusion will be discussed.

To begin

with, the factors why

women

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leadership can be beneficial. If a female

become

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a leader

then

they may

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think about the girl's safety.

Thus

many

women's

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step forward to become independent, stand on their feet and start doing jobs.

For example

, in earlier times

womens

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women

were only restricted to their household chores but nowadays they are doing jobs like

mens

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men

mates

mines

. As many females started doing work in all fields, it boosts

up

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confidence among others as well.

Consequently

, it brings a positive change in society. Moving

further

, Leadership is not limited to gender as well

on

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outer strength,

however

, it depends on the inner ability to do the work effectively.

For instance

, in today's time, a female is equally standby with

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and

also

she is in every profession,

such

as doctor, lawyer, politician and teacher.

Also

, a female is balancing both personal and professional life in an efficient way.

Moreover

,

a

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women

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women

can take decisions by keeping in mind people's

necessity

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and emotions.

As a result

, she is the one who

know

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how to perform work in a better way. In conclusion,

although

some people disagree about the

women

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be as an owner

but

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i

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believe that she can run an empire like a family by fulfilling all the responsibilities.