Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

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is something
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very important for most
people
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success
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can mean different things. For some
people
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success
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is for your
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,
others
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your personal
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. I think that
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success
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is very important and it is a mix of these. For some
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people
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success
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for
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your
job
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is your
salary
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. If you earn a high
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then
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you are
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success
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person. The
job
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is not as important as the
salary
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. Other
people
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think that
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in
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job
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is what you do. If you do your
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very well
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it is a
success
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a teacher might help lots of students to get good exams and have good results at school
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the teacher is
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a success
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success
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but some
people
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say the
salary
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is small. I think if you enjoy your
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you are
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success
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in your
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.
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, for other
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people
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success
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in
life
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is in your personal
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. If you have a marriage happily and
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family
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a family
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that
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happy
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this
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is
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success
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.
Success
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is not only your
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but
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personal feelings. In
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I think that
success
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is a mixture of different things and
success
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it
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is different for other
people
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. I think that if you have a good
job
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that is
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enjoyable for you
then
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this
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is a
success
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.
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if you have a good family
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this
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is
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success
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a success
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. I think if your
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is good enough to have the money you need for
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your family
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then
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this
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is the best
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fulfillment
  • personal goals
  • happiness
  • career milestones
  • professional development
  • financial independence
  • security
  • philanthropy
  • contribution
  • personal development
  • recognition
  • work-life balance
  • self-improvement
  • well-being
  • subjective
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