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In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools

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Compared with the past, the importance of education has changed all over the world. These days, we have many ways to solve the
problem
. Some people believe that the
problem
 can be solved by providing more schools. I want to give the main solution to
this
problem
 in
this
 article.
First
, if we don't have any facilities to access education
such
 as mathematics, economics, physics, and history.
Then
, our generation doesn't have enough knowledge to be useful people in their country in the future.
Moreover
, the old population will retire and nobody can't alter them.
As a result
, a country inverted to be a weak country.
On the other hand
, The government should seriously think and find an efficient way to solve the
problem
. The
first
 way is giving a budget to create good services for each school which means, having a good location to access a maximum of students if the location is not good, they can grant a free ticket or a really low price to take a bus to reach a school or approve free services to pick some students who live far from a school up, and build a big space and class to keep the amount of the crowd as much as can. In conclusion, educations are really important for countries and we have to pay attention.
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