Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is a key part

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our society better. The ratio of literacy and educated

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been increasing rapidly.

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now

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society gives respect to educated

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.Since ancient ,times it has been observed humans used to go to

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for education and development,

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some believe teaching at

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is best. I think both have their own advantages and going to emphasise

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in the below paragraphs. To commence with

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is a centre of different kinds of

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who come with their own talents and

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different interests like sports, science, arts, and painting and schools

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all types of teachers and labs,where

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can learn and do practically. Whether sports ,technology , art,

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painting The World is growing exponentially and the competition has

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increased. The

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are learning many things

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talking to their classmates.Tests are often taken by the

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after that

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get to know what they have learned and where they need to focus.

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can compare themselves with their classmates and try harder.

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: During covid and ,lockdown all schools were closed and the

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were doing classes online. The expert report says parents were having big concerns about the child's growth as they were not going to

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. The Nobel winner Mr Banarjee(Economist) says in an interview

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lockdown and online classes our

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get behind three years of their talent. On the other ,hand some

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teach their

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at

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for the best development. Teaching at

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keeps

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focused on particular things that they want to achieve. The

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don't get diverted at

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study as they do not interact with other students. The Parents always monitor their

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and keep suggesting what is wrong and right. Many IITINs crack their exam by self-studies. Having all

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consideration, going to

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is the best way for child development rather than

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study.