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Modern children are suffering from those disease which were once consider to be meant for the aduts only.obesity is the major disease prevalent among the children.what are its causes and remedies?

#children #disease #aduts #obesity #remedies
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gradual
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 progression of fast
food
 intake in our daily life ,we see
children
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suffering from diseases which were once confined to adults
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obesity
 was once observed in
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people above 40 yrs of age. but nowadays young
children
 around 10 yrs of age are facing
the
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issues related to
obesity
. Apart from fast
food
, another reason for
this
 is
sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle. With
advancement
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the advancement
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 of
technology
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 everything is available at the click of
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 , so there is no form of physical exercise or walking involved which eventually leads to
obesity
. Earlier , when there were no
food
 apps ,
children
 ,if they want to eat fast
food
 had to step outside
home
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 to buy and eat which eventually lead to some form of physical activity which helps in burning those extra fats
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 to prevent
obesity
 in
children
 , some sort of physical activity
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is
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id
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is
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 required
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in order
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inorder
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 to
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loose
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 those extra fats in the body
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, there should be
healthy
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a healthy
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 diet plan which includes fibres which
promotes
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 good metabolism to reduce
those fat forming
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that fat forming
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. in all healthy lifestyle plus healthy
food
 habits in
children
 will eventually help to fight the battle against
the
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obesity
 in
children
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