Some people choose a career, according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career, according to whether they will enjoy the work. Which do you think is the best way to choose a career? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Great minds shared success storytelling that they have chosen a career on which they enjoy working and time flies. Plenty of humans today follow the trend and live mediocre life. I think making a hobby your career will lead to the most pleasure, satisfaction and wealth eventually.
On the one hand, people grade the
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profession
based on the information gathered by observing the society around them. This
leads to surety and less ambiguity as the path and profession
have already time tested and robust by multiple people. Therefore
, the chances of failure are less and the trending profession
attracts more and more youth towards them. For example
, since the beginning of humanity doctors are on the top edge profession
which still exists. Due to the wide range of customers , cater every year more and more individuals are attracted to and participate in this
profession
which leads them to the same social status and salary which they desired observing the trend at the start of their career formation.
On the other hand
, there are people who need more than their social status and salary, these groups believe in themself and hold the courage to make difference in society. To begin
with, more than half of the workforce in an organisation didn't like their job but still doing it for parks, whereas, someone with passion
towards that work, thinks beyond all of this
and keeps pushing their limits and enhancing their skill, day in and day out. This
dedication leads them to upgrade themself and get increased parks and sometimes developing a unique idea makes them ultra-successful in life. For example
, Elon Mask, a great investor and entrepreneur love what he does and he keeps on working towards his passion
which changed his life completely.
To conclude, after discussing both the views, I personally believe that passion
is the utmost thing we should focus on, whether it was someone, whose influence put us in the current profession
or by self-chosen path, we should always try to develop passion
towards our in-hand work and always try to get good out of it.Submitted by manishkj007 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite