Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an obvious fact that the rate of

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is burgeoning significantly in every nation due to the absence of

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safety.

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, a section of individuals considers that the perfect way to enhance highway safety

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should announce a number of driving tests in every locality. I agree with

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notion to large extent. I shall be discussed my viewpoint in forthcoming fragments. At the outset, there are innumerable reasons which support the fact that why announcing new

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is imperative in

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and foremost one is that the rate of happening might be declined. To be more precise, nowadays misfortune has become a prevalent trend due to poor

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and regulations as well as

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.

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, most younger are being faced with trouble as compared to senior citizens because of a lack of driving proper knowledge,

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, the regime ought to set up new driving

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in every corner where people get benefit easily. To epitome, the recent headline of economic time delineated that if the people follow the given rule of

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80: chances of

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might be mitigation. As a

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result

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must focus on driving

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, the high regime should

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set up drive pass certificate test

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every human, and they have to pass

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test as

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, they could drive vehicles

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without a certificate

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should be given a tremendous fine

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them.

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, every medical hospital ought to take responsibility owing to some cases that have been seen while driving person's health can deteriorate at any time as a consequence, the high authority established some places for checking nearby highways. For an instance, the recent headline of the tribune demonstrated that in India

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happening have declined due to the present medical staff every time as well as concrete new driving

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. To sum up,

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ample

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why an accident occurs

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as lack of driving knowledge, has no strict action on

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. Yet, there are multifarious ways due to which

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problems might be mitigated which I have mentioned.