Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an obvious fact that the rate of

accidents

is burgeoning significantly in every nation due to the absence of

traffic

safety.

Therefore

, a section of individuals considers that the perfect way to enhance highway safety

government

should announce a number of driving tests in every locality. I agree with

this

notion to large extent. I shall be discussed my viewpoint in forthcoming fragments. At the outset, there are innumerable reasons which support the fact that why announcing new

traffic

rules

is imperative in

this

cutting-edge era. The

first

and foremost one is that the rate of happening might be declined. To be more precise, nowadays misfortune has become a prevalent trend due to poor

rules

and regulations as well as

traffic

rules

.

Moreover

, most younger are being faced with trouble as compared to senior citizens because of a lack of driving proper knowledge,

Hence

, the regime ought to set up new driving

rules

in every corner where people get benefit easily. To epitome, the recent headline of economic time delineated that if the people follow the given rule of

government

then

80: chances of

accidents

might be mitigation. As a

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result

government

must focus on driving

rules

. Moving

further

, the high regime should

be

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set up drive pass certificate test

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every human, and they have to pass

this

test as

consequently

, they could drive vehicles

otherwise

without a certificate

government

should be given a tremendous fine

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them.

In addition

, every medical hospital ought to take responsibility owing to some cases that have been seen while driving person's health can deteriorate at any time as a consequence, the high authority established some places for checking nearby highways. For an instance, the recent headline of the tribune demonstrated that in India

accidents

happening have declined due to the present medical staff every time as well as concrete new driving

rules

. To sum up,

although

there

are

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ample

reason

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why an accident occurs

such

as lack of driving knowledge, has no strict action on

traffic

rules

. Yet, there are multifarious ways due to which

accidents

problems might be mitigated which I have mentioned.