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The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television. Do you agree or disagree?

#internet #impact #people’s #lives #television
I found
Skill
 Up when I was scrolling through my Instagram homepage. At
first
, I thought
Skill
 Up just provided valuable content that talked about stuff we need for preparing ourselves before applying for a job. When I scrolled around
Skill
 Up’s website, I found that there are so many programmes that
Skill
 Up offers to university students, one of them is
SCALE
 (
Skill
 Up
Competition
 Academy: Learn and Escalate).
SCALE
 is a program that focuses on helping university students who want to join
business
case
 competitions but have no idea how to do it.
This
 programme offers
three month
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 mentorship with a great mentor. I am really grateful that there is a platform that provides mentoring for
Business
Case
Competition
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. I am sure that
this
 is a big opportunity for me to escalate my
performa
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performance
 in the
Business
Case
Competition
. From seeing the
contents
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content
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 on
Skill
 Up’s Instagram and
also
 knowing
people
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the people
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 behind
Skill
 Up, I can tell that being a mentee
in
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at
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Skill
 Up is
a
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the
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 right decision for me. My objective
by
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in
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 joining
SCALE
 is I want to get guidelines on how to start
business
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a business
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case
 study. Since I’m very beginning at
this
competition
, it is really confusing
me
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for me
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 because I do not know what I should do
first
. I
also
 hope that I can get partners who want to collaborate with me for joining
this
competition
 since I see that there are so many BCC that require 3 people minimum for joining
but
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apply
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(
gapapa
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papa
kalo
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Kalo
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 beda univ). The good thing is
this
 programme
also
 gives us a chance to imply insights that we have got from 3 months
mentoring
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of mentoring
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 by joining
business
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a business
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case
 simulation . With
SCALE
, I believe that I can enhance my potential.
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