Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals to which extent do you agree or disagree?

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is to prepare children to be more productive.

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believe that

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have a positive impact on us as individuals.

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mostly teach their students to be

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workers in

jobs

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sectors. The

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schools

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school's

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curriculum

concentrate

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on improving some skills that are not

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necessary

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going to help us in the real world

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as memorizing texts and definitions which is

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not the best approach

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learning,

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, most teachers criticize their pupils when they fail in their tests, ignoring that the essence of great success is great failings.

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may execute trepidation of failing when they are experiencing life as adults.

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,

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opportunities will

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them because they always avoid risk-taking as they assume to avoid failure,

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conception can be devastating for children in their life.

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,

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have a great impact overall in our life in terms of aspects like education and occupation. Society members may sometimes adopt and circulate the experience of some successful people and deal with it as

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not

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an exceptional state, as they claim that most of the biggest successful people did not go to school, overlooking the millions of people that

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was

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a crucial component of their success

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as becoming the CEO of a particular company. Another interesting thing is that most of the jobs in the

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century

requires

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qualifications and

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apply

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schools

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certification is the most important among them. in conclusion, the methodology used in teaching children should be optimized to align the real-world demands.

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schools

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have a beneficial effect on

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society and

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individuals.