Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotions and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products.

Compared with the past, the number of companies and large businesses increasing all over the world causes the population to tend to buy from big companies
instead
of buying from local
products
. In
this
article, I want to discuss what problems will happen and what solutions we have.
Firstly
, it's really natural that
people
want to buy objects
such
as clothes, meat, and milk from brands known to everybody.
For example
, men buy milk from famous brands like Kirland
instead
of local brands that nobody knows.
Then
,
this
method of
people
's buying causes unemployee who works in the local market.
Moreover
, workers can't make money which means they are unable to buy rice, potato, and meat.
As a result
, it will happen sociality problems like stress and anxiety.
On the other hand
, one of the most solutions for
this
problem is supporting the government like giving a budget for promotions. I think promotions it's really important to make
people
trust and sell the product.
For example
, the government should give space to gather workers with their
products
every week. Workers can present and explain their
products
such
as how much healthy or how many calories have or how they earn and not
also
can give those to them but
also
can give those to them like gifts and say you can keep them to figure out quality after taking time.
Then
, men and women noticed that about local
products
. In conclusion, the government can play the best role to encourage
people
to buy local
products
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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