Some people think that one of the best ways to solve enviromental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

At the present time, we are suffering from threats from the environment, clearly seen

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from

air pollution, water pollution and probably more. People are using too

much

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non-renewable

resources

, including

fuel

for cars and vehicles, which is harmful. So, it is believed that one of the most proper ways to discharge the problems is

increase

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the cost of

this kind

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these kinds

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of materials,

in tend

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to make the world better. From my point of

views

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, it is accurate to admit that

this

idea is absolutely unreasonable. To clear, it should be

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up in an essay As we can see, the development of the world’s society has

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contribution

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of

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to

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energy

in

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a long period up to now. Important inventions have been used regularly since its establishment. One of them, we mention here is

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transportations

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transportation

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, and it is related closely to the

existance

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existence

of

resources

use, like

fuel

. The supporting sentence at the opening said the fact about the energy that may be depleted easily,might be

comsidered

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considered

in

fuel

. Providing that we have a look as the experts,

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running out of

fuel

can create an

economical

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crisis that

affect

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badly to

amount

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of fields to improve the countries and the citizens’ living

standard

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standards

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. Looking at

further

ways , the war between Russia and Ukraine is

an

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clear example,

when

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Europe need the advantages

from

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fuel

.

This

kind of

powers

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in price rising can reduce

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vehicle production

that is

playing a strong role to connect and upgrade other workouts. To be honest, we put ourselves in issues in order to know what is the benefit of consuming

resources

, mainly about petrol.

However

, in another opinion, we have a great impact to be aware of

fuel

price,

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we should take the cost in a suitable value. People’s efforts in replacing the consumption of normal travelling

equipments

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by

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bicycle or

enviromentally

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environmentally

friendly

one

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need to be concentrated on.

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this

solution, the pollution can be

dealed

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with.

On the other hand

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daily living has changed people’s

mind

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about using

less car

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fewer cars

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or

motorbike

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motorbikes

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, except

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severals

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several

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special

situation

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. The truth is, we had better change to comfort the world, to understand what is the real value of using energy, since the outstanding transformation of technology. In conclusion, what we have nowadays is

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variety of

resources

to decide our future,

also

the

responbility

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responsibility

for the potential dangers when

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immediatly

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immediately

come

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across. For that. we need to take over our best

works

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so that the issues can be removed clearly.