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Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The student who is going overseas may have better life considering wealth, but have to
face
 a lot of difficulties regarding social matters
such
 as different cultures and language changes. I totally agree with that statement since
majority
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the majority
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 of the
students
face
such
 difficulties. People willing to migrate for studies more and more nowadays due to gain desired aspects of knowledge, they
facing
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 serious problems Is after arriving in another
country
. Most of the time they selected to go overseas as they have to fulfil their parent's will. Bat it will harmful to their Social life as well as mental health. They leave their parents, sibling and other relatives as well as close friends. It may give homesick to them strongly
hence
 they far away from close ones. Missing their fold friends would give
to
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a lot of disadvantages throughout
University
 time for some individuals until come back homelands. Some
Students
face
such
 long-lasting Loneliness after getting foreign
Country
 because they are slowly adapting to a different culture. Even though their motions and difficulties arise. It's impossible to go back to the
Country
 where they lived before.
Students
 have to spend a lot of
money
 on Foreign
education
 and are never able to have
such
 an amount by doing part-time jobs as they have to pay college fees for foreign
universities
.it may lead to an effect Strongly for their economy. as well as their parent's economy .After reaching their motherlands they have to work more time duration for covering their
education
 expenses. I think it's better to spend
university
 fees for their local
Universities
 rather than foreign
universities
 as the problem they have to
face
.
On the other
hand
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University
students
 can invest that
money
 in a business or another resource that
make
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 some
money
 above paying
university
 fees. It's true to have an
education
 is more valuable than anything else, but it is essential to have
further
education
. It's better to have an
education
 from an overseas
Universities
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 located in the motherland rather than going outside of their
country
. In ,conclusion
although
 there can be
seenas
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seen as
a few advantages to foreign
education
 we can see more drawbacks
such
 as loneliness, Stress, less
money
, being far away from close friends so on.
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