the average yearly number of visitors to four different art galleries and the profits they made from ticket sales in 2001, 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates information about average attendance in 2001, 2008 and 2016, while the table provides data about the profit four galleries made in the same years. Generally, all of them increased their earnings, despite the fact that some of them did not have much growth in the
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of visitors. To start with Malevich, which demonstrated an increasing trend in the
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of people who attended it, starting at 1 623 185 in 2001 and doubling the figures in 2016. Turning to Guardare, which shows a declining pattern with some fluctuations, with 2 300 000 visitors in 2016. Despite differences, both galleries increased their income, with approximately 70 million dollars for each. The largest
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of individuals visited Impressionism, for two years it was a leader, but in 2016 Chianaart considerably went up and the former was replaced by the latter as the most attended art gallery. Even though, there were changes in the
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of visitors, the most successful and so the most profitable was Impressionism through the years, with around 220 million dollars.

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