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some people opine that it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career. while, others think that it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

#people #opine #time #career #friends
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developing a successful career. while
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 others think that it is more important to spend
time
 with friends and family. in my essay, I'll discuss both views and express my beliefs. It's a very hard and chronic debate whether to be devoted to
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 or to social
life
, while the easy and the correct answer is to split
time
 between both sides,
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 it's not that easy to achieve it, since
life
 is not always or in most cases are not helpful enough to make that balance. Building a successful career is a very
ipmortant
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important
 thing,
first
 to secure
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sufficient income for a decent lifestyle and to save some for
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rainy days,
helath
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health
 care and to guarantee a
comofortable
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comfortable
 retirement,
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 to
saftisfy
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satisfy
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successful. Taking care of the family and having a good
time
 with friends is
also
 very necessary to renew the mental, psychological, and emotional energy, which we
also
 need to keep our minds in souls happy and healthy. looking back in
time
 to my own personal
life
, In my early years of
work
,
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 devoted myself to
work
 in order to achieve success, and to
accumilate
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accumulate
 money, and in return, I disregarded my family and my fellows,
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 I wasn't satisfied
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 being
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 from my beloved ones. After learning from my mistakes, I decided to make some balance between all aspects of
life
, and
finally
, it paid something worthy. In my opinion, each person shall make stability in his lifestyle between all sides of
life
, to
work
, to the loved ones, to
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pysical
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physical
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mental
wellbeing
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, to spiritual needs. no need to make an equal share to each party, just dedicate what can be dedicated
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 and shares can be maximized or minimized from
time
 to
time
 based on the ability to do so. We need to remember that success worth nothing if we don't have
some one
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 we love to celebrate our success with.
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 is the use of
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money, if we are not healthy to enjoy it
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