A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you, but you are not available on that date. Give your friend another alternate date for the visit. In your letter, you should: -apologise for it -explain what you are doing on that date -suggest to him/her an alternate time to come.

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I,
m
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happy to hear from you that you are planning to visit our country and
staying
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stay
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with me
on
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apply
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next
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month. I,
m
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so
existing
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exiting
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to see you because
i
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I
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did not
seen
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see
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you since I,
m
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left
from
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England. Me and my family
ready
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to give you big welcome.
Frist
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First
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of all
i
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I
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,d like to say sorry to you, because
next
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month
27
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on 27
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th
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that
I have to travel to China for
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business
purpose
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purposes
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. I
,
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m
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planning to stay
overthere
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over there
around one week and during that week I have to
vist
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visit
many
factory
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and have to search
new
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for new
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product
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products
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for my company.
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, I will
back
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be back
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to
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home 3rd of
Febuary
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February
and I,d like to suggest you
to
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come 4th of
Febuary
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February
, because we are celebrating National Holiday on that day. Hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Asanka.
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