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a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given map presents modernization in students' living within ten years time.
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 of all,the north west part of the building was extended and the garden there was cut-down.Morover,the garden in the south part was cleared and replaced with a car parking. Turning to the reconstruction inside the dormitory, the living room was converted into additional bedroom with two entrances :from the front yard and from the corridor. Social area has been added to kitchen.The en-suite room has been developed in hallway, just in front of the main entrance with a door into student bedroom located in the south east part of the house. Overall,there have been a few noticeable changes in accomodation: two extra bedrooms, social area and en-suite room have been created, garden on the back yard has been transformed into car parking.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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