It is an obvious fact that happening enormous 
 in every nation has become an eminent trend. Not only 
 but 
 are encountering  accommodation issues Whether they 
 to overseas nations or near any locality. 
, the high authority has an assumption that if they 
 tremendous associations as well as factories to the remote area 
, the problem might be solved. I fully agree with 
 notion. I shall be explored my viewpoints in forthcoming fragments.
At the outset, there are innumerable reasons which support the fact that why migrating huge 
 to rural areas might be given extremely fruitful benefits. The 
 and foremost one is that 
 as well as toxic gases might be mitigated. To be more precise, since  tons of production have been established in every knock and corner 
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 plenty of individuals are starting to focus on economic growth rather than concentrate on 
. 
, human beings are suffering from
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 number of ailments due to poison gasses which are being discharged from factories. 
, due to present 
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 beside the roads  have become the cause of 
 jam masses usually reach  late their destination.To epitome, the survey was conducted by Cambridge University in 2019. They showed that 60 ratio 
 is seen in Finland due to vast shops.If the production 
 to the rural area 
, the 
 and 
 issue would be mitigated.
Turing to accommodation points, everyone's one 
 is a prevalent issue but along with lack of houses have become a renowned trend in 
 cutting edge era. Even though the present industries are catering jobs to destitute 
 yet, it gives 
  problems.  Those human have left their home in order from their debt 
, they can get jobs easily 
 they are unable to get a 
 which is more essential as compared to earning money. 
, if some 
 get to rent a 
 they are unable to pay rent because of huge inflation. 
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 to urban localities As a consequence, 
 would not only suffer from 
 problems but 
 they can live in houses and save their monthly expenses. 
, the headline of the tribune delineated that  the high authority of India has moved 30 percentile 
 to 
 another area 
, the problem of housing and 
 jams has declined by 47 per cent. 
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  likely to execute their jobs who were jobless before.
To sum up, above mentioned fragments clear that if 
 were present in the urban areas nowadays 
 in future it would be an insurmountable task for the government to reduce 
 and 
 jams. Yet, the regime has a chance they can 
 all shops and businesses to remote areas
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