You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with the content
that is
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being relayed by your station on television during early morning hours. There is
crime
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series name
Crime
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Petrol
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currently shown between 9am to 10am three days a week, which I find not ideal for
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time of the day because it contains a few obscene as well as heinous
crime
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scenes that are very disturbing and it teaches people new ways to commit the
crime
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. Being an esteemed institution it is your moral responsibility to guide society towards good,
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I would request you to kindly change the show timing and please give
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slot to the Ramayana series so that people can learn good deeds from it. I hope you would give wisely consider the issue and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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