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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment.

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The diagrams demonstrate the current structure of a university's
sports
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 depict plans that how it will look after modification. As an overview, there are plans to remove the outdoor courts, and in the future, there will be additional facilities like a
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 hall, dance studio as well as changing room and coffee shop. At the moment, the university
sports
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 has large outdoor courts which are going to change.
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, western courts have a leisure pool, another changing room, and a shop which is for
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 items. The entire main building will not undergo alterations including the changing room, a seating area, and the main reception point. The only slight change would be that gym will be long in size than the dance studio.
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, the pool size is 20meter remains stable after an upgrade
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 located in the
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