One of your friends is planning to visit your country and asking you for some information. Write a letter to him/her and say: o when the best time to visit your country is o suggest a plan for the travel o recommend places to visit in your countr

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place

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in my country and when is the best time to visit

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you are

comming

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country. My country

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a pretty seasons

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, but it's better

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are coming here in spring or summer when the weather is

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suitable

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place you should visit is Isfahan. It's one of the most famous cities in the world. It has beautiful

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old buildings with traditional architecture and special

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. You can stay in

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city for 5 days and see all of them. after

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you should go to Shiraz. you can see Grand Bazar and

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old kingdom in Iran. you can stay there for 2 days and go sightseeing. After

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you should go to the west of Iran. I think is the most beautiful part of Iran. It has mountains with

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waterfall

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and great plains and

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you can

see good people

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different

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culture

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information. Best wishes, Reza

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

168 words

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