In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

The graph illustrates a community website which was visited by people in the

first

and

second

year

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. Overall, the number of visits in the

first

year

was lower than the

next

year

moreover

it can be shown that the number of visits had

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significant ups and downs in both years.

Initially

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visitors

were lower than 5000 in September in the

first

and

second

year

2 months later in November both of them increased dramatically and reached almost 10000 and 17000 respectively.

subsequently

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both remain

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level as November in the

next

month (December). The number of

visitors

in the

first

year

curbed remarkably in the following four months and it was visited

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about 6500 people in May

moreover

the

visitors

enhanced frequently which got 15000

visitors

in the

last

month (August) while the

second

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had a

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decrease for 2 months and after that

this

went up severely and got more than 20000

visitors

in July but it dropped to 10000

visitors

and reached for about 130000

visitors

in August