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The pie charts illustrate the result of a survey of
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activities
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and culture for both children girls and boys. Generally, girl children have the highest spending on
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activities
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on dancing, but boy children’s spending on
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activities
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are highest on computer gaming. The
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graph shows boys’ cultural and
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activities
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. The
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highest spending time is basketball at 26%.
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, listening to music and skateboarding ate have approximately the same percentage. Reading is the least
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activity at 2%.
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, soccer has 17% of boys’ cultural and
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activities
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.
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, girls’ culture has almost double reading than listening to music, but still dancing is the highest percentage than other
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,
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listening to music and gymnastics are approximately the same percentage at 10% and 11% respectively.
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, netball and computer games are nearly the same.

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