More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Recently, the number of
people
buying household goods,
such
as television, microwave oven and rice cooker has increased significantly. I believe that
this
has been a good development because by having access to
this
equipment,
people
's lives have changed for the better. In
this
essay
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I am going to explain why and support
this
with some examples.
To begin
with, owning a television means that our society can watch different programmes which can be informative and entertaining.
Also
,
people
might learn a new skill from television programmes, which might not have happened if there was no access to it.
For example
, in 2020, during the lockdown,
people
all over the world, watched and performed a fitness programme which was only shown on TV. It helped keep
people
fit physically and mentally. Another reason why I think that buying goods has improved
people
's lives is that society as a whole has become busier than in the past,
this
means that we should
also
adapt to make life easier. Buying equipment,
such
as a rice cooker or a microwave oven, leads to reducing time while cooking.
This
is convenient, especially for working
people
with young families.
For instance
, cooking a meal in the past would have taken double the amount of time needed to cook a meal today. Most of the dishes are prepared, all you need to do is heat them in the microwave and them serve. In conclusion,
although
there might be some against it, I am certain that our society's lives have improved significantly since we were able to have access to household goods.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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