More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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Recently, the number of

people

buying household goods,

such

as television, microwave oven and rice cooker has increased significantly. I believe that

this

has been a good development because by having access to

this

equipment,

people

's lives have changed for the better. In

this

essay

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I am going to explain why and support

this

with some examples.

To begin

with, owning a television means that our society can watch different programmes which can be informative and entertaining.

Also

people

might learn a new skill from television programmes, which might not have happened if there was no access to it.

For example

, in 2020, during the lockdown,

people

all over the world, watched and performed a fitness programme which was only shown on TV. It helped keep

people

fit physically and mentally. Another reason why I think that buying goods has improved

people

's lives is that society as a whole has become busier than in the past,

this

means that we should

also

adapt to make life easier. Buying equipment,

such

as a rice cooker or a microwave oven, leads to reducing time while cooking.

This

is convenient, especially for working

people

with young families.

For instance

, cooking a meal in the past would have taken double the amount of time needed to cook a meal today. Most of the dishes are prepared, all you need to do is heat them in the microwave and them serve. In conclusion,

although

there might be some against it, I am certain that our society's lives have improved significantly since we were able to have access to household goods.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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Introduction & conclusion present

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More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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