Rampart street today and the plan for changes to the street in 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps demonstrate information about the current state of Rampart
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provide predictions for its possible transformations in 2035. Generally, the main focus is on creating additional leisure activities and making the street more comfortable for pedestrians. Turning to already existing objects, the striking modification is likely to happen to the road, as the plan is to pedestrianise it.
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lead to the creation of tracks for bicyclists and the placement of additional benches to make the walking zone more convenient. As for the construction site, it is planned to be demolished in order to be replaced by florists. The Old Castle is expected to be refurbished and opened for visitors, with a nice lake located near it. With reference to new buildings, that possibly may occur on open lots. The biggest one will be the exhibition centre, which will be situated right behind the hotel.
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, it will have an open-air exhibition as well. Net to it will be a gift shop, between the embassy and food store it is planned to open a restaurant, and the pub will be located right opposite
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the Old Castle.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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