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Government should invest in teaching science subjects rather than other sunjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#government #science #subjects #sunjects #country #progress
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In recent years, many countries have benefited greatly from the advancement of
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 and technology. We are now living in the dreams of our grandparents, thanks to the convenience brought by it.
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, some people think the focus should be placed heavily on teaching
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 to
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 develop the country, while others do not agree. In my opinion,
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 like
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 and physical education are equally important. Though we can not deny the sweet fruits of
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,
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 as the development of advanced scanning machines in the early detection of cancer , we can not abandon other areas which are very important for humanity.
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,
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, is a documentation of the cultural history of mankind, and if we do not teach young generations ,it will become extinct in near future.
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, we will miss the enrichment of the soul that only
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 could bring.
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, not every child is interested in
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 and their natural gift in other
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 should not be ignored . Another subject like physical health is
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 fundamental to ensure children will grow up healthy.
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, we can not achieve our full potential without a healthy body and mind. If we only focus on
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 and neglect health, children will be suffering prematurely from illnesses ,
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, obesity, young hypertension and diabetes mellitus. Even though development in medical
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 recently has helped tremendously in treating and possibly curing certain illnesses, I always believe prevention is better than cure. In conclusion, there should be a balance between
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subjects
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 and other important
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 like
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 and physical education, in order to produce youth that will contribute positively to the growth of the nation.These
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 should work hand in hand so we can get the maximum advantages from each to make our society a much better place to live .
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