More and more wild animals are on the verfe if extinction and other are on the endanger list. what are the reasons for this. what can be done to solve this problem.

Due to several
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disastrous
in the world,
such
as lack of water, erosion, and particularly
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, the environment and its species have been affected badly. Even though a number of experts have examined
this
topic, there is no effective solution yet. In
this
essay, I am going to
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explain
where these issues among
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wild
animals
originated from and offer a few solutions.
To begin
with, the most significant cause of decreasing the number of wild
animals
and the danger that they encounter
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is
over-hunting
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overhunting
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.
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example
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, people have
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a tendecy
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tendecy
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tendency
to shoot
someting
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something
, especially, something that
moving
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.
Hence
, they like shooting
animals
without thinking about
environment
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the environment
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as well as wild
animals
' life.
Besides
this
problem
, there is a well-known fact that has
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on all
speicies
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species
in the world, including human beings, Global warming. Because of rapid developments in
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Industry and Technology, the earth is hotter
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it did. As a consequence, white bears have been losing their living space over the century. So, wild
animals
are in danger.
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a large number of
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rights activist is trying to protect
animals
against
to
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extinction, their solutions
is
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not good enough and do not target long-term activities.
For instance
, the precautions that are taken by individuals cannot eradicate
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the problem
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even not able to minimize the results.
That is
why
,
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whole
instutitions
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institutions
and governments in the entire world have
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in
a
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harmony. By restricting
the
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hunting, setting up filter systems for the factories, and arranging a lot of
campaings
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campaigns
to inform people about the extinctions, the
problem
can be fixed. In conclusion, extinction and increasing the
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of
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the endangared
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endangared
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endangered
list are huge issues,
nonetheless
, by applying
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that I have mentioned above the
problem
can be eradicated in the future.
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