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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In recent years, working for others has become less popular whereas becoming self-employed has been increasing day by day. In
this
 essay, I will highlight the cause of
people
's choices about selecting your profession and what they choose for a living.
People
 choose to become self-employed as they get the freedom to do their job as they don't have any fixed period or working days. They
also
 don't have any boss or anyone whose orders must need to abide by themselves.
For instance
, they can start or end their
work
 whenever they wish.
In contrast
, They are the ones who can give orders and instructions to their employees. Many
people
 prefer self-satisfaction over money, want a peaceful place to
work
, and a perfect group of
people
 like them, these kinds of humans most of the time choose the self job or
work
 for inner satisfaction. For the negative side of self-employed,
first
 of all, they need to think about income
this
 is because there is no specific amount of salary can take for them they have to earn
this
.
Secondly
, they have to manage a suitable amount of money for starting a business or doing any other
work
. Sometimes many
people
 collect their capital by taking a loan from a bank for other
people
 it
also
 brings a regular stand for
this
 person as he always has to think to refund money. In conclusion, though there is complete Independence for a person who loves to
work
 for himself
such
 as no limited duty, and no rules to maintain; they have a lot of pressure to manage capital, enough income, and the company's future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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