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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

#professionals #doctors #teachers #countries #work #situation
Nowadays,
the
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professionals
of
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the
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undeveloped
countries
such
 as teachers and doctors
are prefer
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 to live and work
more
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in more
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 developed
country
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countries
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.
This
 essay will discuss what is the mean causes of
this
 issue and give some examples and solutions. In fact,
the
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people
 with high
education
are
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living their own poor
country
 has many advantages for
individual
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the individual
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 person.
For example
, there is more possible to earn
high
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 salary, improve their life situation and chance to enhance their quality of
education
 level. But their own
country
 suffers
lot's
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 of problems.
For
instance
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 native
people
 can't take higher
education
 and health benefits that are really crucial.
Therefore
 government should demand
to
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professionals who leave their
countries
 to arrive
their
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 own
country
 after
defined
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a defined
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 period.
Moreover
, It hugely affects to development of the
country
 by experienced
people
 leaving their
countries
.
For example
, the
countries
 like Bangladesh and Pakistan is
independent
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an independent
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country
, but still
under-developed
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underdeveloped
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 because of their infrastructure.
Thus
,
government
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the government
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 should take
high
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a high
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 wage system and enhance the environment of their working situation. To conclude the fact that
high
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 educated
people
 staying foreign
countries
 to live and work effected bad consequences
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on that
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that
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education
 and health system
to
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in
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 their own
country
.
Therefore
 government should give solutions to tackle
this problems
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this problem
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.
Furthermore
,
this
 deprives the citizens of good teachers, sensible
health care
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healthcare
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 workers and expert engineers, ultimately leading to less chance of advancement for these
countries
.
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