It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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opinion that
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priority
in terms of learning
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different languages before getting
English
is waste of time in today's world. I agree with
this
idea completely due to a number of reasons.
To begin
with,
English
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essential language of
world
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for many years and has dominated vary of sectors.
In other words
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language
may provide many opportunities to reach various sources
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the fields
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. To illustrate, a researcher who wants to
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conducted by
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before himself
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herself, to progress
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labouriously
by using former
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means, if he
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she had not known
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, he
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she would not reach
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.
Therefore
, learning
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second
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language
main way to attend
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community.
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although
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to use
English
has to be
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, there are
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of languages which have
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to
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,
such
as French and German. In fact, learning these tongues not only
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capability
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scentific
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opportunity
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to get close
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art.
For example
, it is known that many films, poets and books
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been written in
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language and if
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ordinary man can learn
this
tongue
he
/
she may
also
understand
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of
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which
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in French. Yet,
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all
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by learning foreign languages apart from
English
should not be considered primary.
Thus
, learning
English
has a
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privilege
, because every
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do their works by using
English
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. To conclude,
although
learning
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various
tongues
diffrent
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different
from
English
like German and Frech may enable
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of fields
such
as art as well as science,
English
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effect on all areas mentioned before.
Thus
, in my
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taking
class
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to learn
foreign
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tongue
at
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first
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step apart from
English
is waste of time.
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