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It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #schools #world #today’s #waste #time
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priority
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 different languages before getting
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 is waste of time in today's world. I agree with
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 idea completely due to a number of reasons.
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 for many years and has dominated vary of sectors.
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, learning
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tongue
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second
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languge
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language
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investigate
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conducted by
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investigators
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herself, to progress
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labouriously
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data
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 means, if he
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she had not known
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, he
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she would not reach
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adequate
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, learning
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second
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lenguage
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language
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 community.
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,
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class
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 to use
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, there are
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researches
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capability
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of
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scentific
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scientific
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opportunity
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, it is known that many films, poets and books
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 ordinary man can learn
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tongue
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she may
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 of
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all
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opportunities
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be reach
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 by learning foreign languages apart from
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 should not be considered primary.
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, learning
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. To conclude,
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various
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different
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 like German and Frech may enable
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 effect on all areas mentioned before.
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 is waste of time.
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