Nowadays many companies have manufacturing facilities in different countries. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
In many societies,
companies
have factories
in various countries
. Most of
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companies
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companies'
company's
factories
are located in undeveloped or developing countries
like the People's Republic of China
, Kingdom
of Thailand and India. Correct article usage
the Kingdom
It
is because placing Correct pronoun usage
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factories
in the
undeveloped or developing Correct article usage
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countries
allows them to recruit a labourer easily. And placing
manufacturing facilities in different Correct word choice
Placing
countries
can make
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help
companies
to
reduce Fix the infinitive
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the
costs. Correct article usage
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Therefore
, there are several advantages and disadvantages for companies
to have factories
in different countries
. First,
for advantages, companies
may recruit a labourer easily. Most of developed
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the developed
country
's citizens does
not want to work in Correct subject-verb agreement
do
factories
. That is
why developed country's
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country
companies
like an
Samsung and Apple are moving their manufacturing facilities to developing Correct article usage
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countries
. Samsung have a
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factories
a factory
factories
in the
Vietnam and India, Apple have Correct article usage
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a
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factories
a factory
factories
in the People's Republic of China
and Republic
of Correct article usage
the Republic
China
(Taiwan). Second,
for disadvantages, companies
may be challenge
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challenged
in
the lack of quality problem. Change preposition
by
Products
produced from different countries
has
a lot of problems, like Change the verb form
have
an
inferior Correct article usage
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goods
. Products
produced from country
A might not have an
inferior Correct article usage
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goods
but products
made from country
B can have an
inferior Correct article usage
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goods
issues. This
situation occurs due to
lack
of labourer's technique. Correct article usage
a lack
For example
, when Samsung moved their
smartphone Correct pronoun usage
its
produce
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production
China
to Korea, inferior
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the inferior
goods
problem had
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raplidly
in 2014. Correct your spelling
rapidly
To sum up
, there are several advantages and disadvantages to companies
have
manufacturing Wrong verb form
having
factories
in different countries
. Businesses can find the best way to make best
quality Correct article usage
the best
products
and expand widely.Submitted by soominkim0618 on
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