In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all student can afford them so somr think that university education should be free. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, every young
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are keen on
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university
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a university
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education in their country or oversea.
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higher ranking
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universities
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which are situated
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abroad required extremely big figures from students. I partly agree with
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policy based on my point of view and support it with examples as well.
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with, most
universities
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define independently their admission process and tuition capital.
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mainly are interested in annual money which is
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from
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university
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the university
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throught
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through
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enrollment.
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families who stay
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low
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privileged
classes cannot accomplish
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occasion. These fees depend on distinctive opportunities which
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can provide for their students
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as top-notch technology, labs and library. On the flip side, from my
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
decline some protocols to free education at
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for all
of
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the privilage
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privilage
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privileged
classes, that implementation can affect positively to society.
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,
young
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the young
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individual
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will want to make a choice to study
university
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which offers affordable money in their country.
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brain
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drain will be
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considerably and can be avoided unemployment problems.
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,
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can appeal
international
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to international
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student
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students
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from other countries. In the nutshell, as a matter of
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university
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education has to be free to more effectively upbringing adults and progressive economical development of
country
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the country
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