Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

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Plastic
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is a great invention
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by mankind for
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human convenient life.
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, it's often too harmful
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nature's life. The regime and inhabitants should be involved to resolve
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problem and give
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I would like to describe possible problems and solutions.
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, nowadays many
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made
plastic
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bags, bottles and boxes for the food industries. Because now we are living in a consumer culture.
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,
people
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often purchase as much
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processed foods and those foods come in
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Packages. Once they consumed food, leftover
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packages throwing into the garbage bin and some of our
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into the river. Those are
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packages ,not environmentally friendly because they are non-biodegradable and lead to water pollution.
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, all river fish will be disappearing. Because, the researchers found when they consumed it as food, they are dying.
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, we can not burn
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items, because when we are trying to burn those products they are releasing toxins into the air and lead to air pollution.
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, the regime and humans can solve
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problem.
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of all, the government should introduce an awareness program.
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, they can arrange
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a recycling program
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. Because some
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made tiers from waste
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items and some
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made garments.
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, the authorities can collect these wastes from the
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and they can sell
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those
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.
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, they can provide many employment opportunities to the
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working as cleaners for collecting litter from the Street.
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, all
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also
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contributed to the resolve
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problem with use many paper bags
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of
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bags. In conclusion,
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plastics product often damage our ecosystem
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, governments and humans often contribute save our Planet and animals with the use
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possible solution.
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