In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, obesity has become one of the outstanding problems in some countries ,especially in developed and developing ones

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to the fact that the majority of people do not have

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healthy

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. In

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modern world, the individual’s activities are so limited. It is obviously clear that technology donates some benefits to

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society like the availability of doing business at home on the Internet or utilizing vacuum cleaners or dishwashers which cause people to become so lazy. In

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case, the lack of physical movements leads to excess weight. Another reason to gain extra weight and to be unhealthy could be because of eating

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especially

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inorganic fruits and vegetables which are grown by harmful chemical fertilizers and artificial substances

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as pesticides or substances used in order to boost the harvest process. These seemingly technological achievements can seriously harm

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health. To halt these irrecoverable influences or reduce the detrimental effects on our

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, some pragmatic measures must be taken. Doctors believe that exercise is one of the best solutions to decreasing obesity and being healthy. By doing exercises

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one hour per day, we will be able to improve our lifestyle remarkably. Another step towards health could be to eat

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foods

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of fast

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. Vegetables and fruits help our

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to have better metabolism. It is

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that digesting these kinds of

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is simpler for the digestive system of our

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than

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meat. To put

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nutshell, I personally believe that the more we eat

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foods

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or do regular exercises, the healthier

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we have as well as a healthier mindset.