Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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topic of
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that
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explore
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new
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such
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as
places
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, types of dishes and daily chores. While, some
people
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argued that new
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are
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therefore
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, they keep doing which familiar
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them. I will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
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with, there are numerous benefits
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people
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who explore
thier
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their
life.
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, they learn
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of different cultures and languages which helps
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people
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growths
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.
Secondly
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,
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who travelled
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to different
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countries that they more experienced in every field. Nowadays, most
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young
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the young
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people
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like to explore and
they
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apply
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learn about
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their
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culture and languages.
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, it can
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survery
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survey
of these
people
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who try new
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that
they
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80% of
folks
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satisfy with
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their experience
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.
Moreover
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, the main benefits of
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try
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trying
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new adventures activity which they will find their passion in exploration.
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,
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the age of 20s
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confused
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to
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about
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future
career
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so, they
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explore their skills and find
their
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right path
of
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future
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the future
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.
On the other hand
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, some individuals
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argued
argue
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which
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know about merits and demerits.
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has
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lack
of
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condifidance
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confidence
so, they do not explore their life .
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, individuals have
experties
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expertise
on
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in
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the
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apply
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one
skills
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.So , they do not try new
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. Illustrate, if a person has been
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working
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in
IT
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company for 15 years, he /she
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expert
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in that
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sector
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.
Therefore
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, his/her does not explore new skills.
Furthermore
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,
people
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who experience new
things
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which
places
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and food in
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a different
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country
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. But some
places
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and food in
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country. But, some
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extremely
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and
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weather so they do not survey. In conclusion, today competition has increased . If a person
workhard
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work hard
works hard
for their
further
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career they
also
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explored
such
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a
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things
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. While, there are
also
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some demerits of exploration
but
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,
i
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will agree will
former
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the former
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point of view.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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