Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
It is
debated
topic of Correct article usage
a debated
today's
that Change noun form
today
folks
are explore
new Wrong verb form
exploring
things
such
as places
, types of dishes and daily chores. While, some people
argued that new things
are time consuming
Add a hyphen
time-consuming
therefore
, they keep doing which familiar with
them. I will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.
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to
To begin
with, there are numerous benefits of
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for
people
who explore thier
life. Correct your spelling
their
Firstly
, they learn value
of different cultures and languages which helps Add an article
the value
to
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apply
people
growths
. Replace the word
grow
Secondly
, folks
who travelled different
countries that they more experienced in every field. Nowadays, most Change preposition
to different
of
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apply
young
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the young
people
like to explore and they
learn about Correct pronoun usage
apply
there
culture and languages. Correct your spelling
their
For example
, it can showed
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show
Correct article usage
a survery
survery
of these Correct your spelling
survey
people
who try new things
that they
80% of Correct pronoun usage
apply
folks
satisfy with experience
. Correct pronoun usage
their experience
Moreover
, the main benefits of people
try
new adventures activity which they will find their passion in exploration. Wrong verb form
trying
For instance
, in
the age of 20s Change preposition
at
juvenile
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juveniles
confused
Add a missing verb
are confused
to
future Change preposition
about
career
so, they Fix the agreement mistake
careers
try
explore their skills and find Add the particle
totry
their
right path Change the word
the
of
Change preposition
for
future
.
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the future
On the other hand
, some individuals arged
that keep doing these Correct your spelling
argued
argue
things
which is
know about merits and demerits. Change the verb form
are
Folks
has
lack Unnecessary verb
apply
of
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apply
condifidance
so, they do not explore their life . Correct your spelling
confidence
In addition
, individuals have experties
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expertise
on
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in
the
one Correct article usage
apply
skills
.So , they do not try new Fix the agreement mistake
skill
things
. Illustrate, if a person has been work
in Change the verb form
working
worked
IT
company for 15 years, he /she Correct article usage
an IT
experts
in that Fix the agreement mistake
expert
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
Therefore
, his/her does not explore new skills. Furthermore
, people
who experience new things
which places
and food in different
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a different
country
. But some Fix the agreement mistake
countries
places
and food in different
country. But, some Add an article
a different
places
has
Change the verb form
have
extremely
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extreme
and
weather so they do not survey.
In conclusion, today competition has increased . If a person Correct word choice
apply
workhard
for their Correct your spelling
work hard
works hard
further
career they also
explored such
a
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apply
things
. While, there are also
some demerits of exploration but
, Correct word choice
apply
i
will agree will Change the capitalization
I
former
point of view.Correct article usage
the former
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