In the future all cars, uses and trucks will be dirverless. This only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advatages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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of all,
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technology has many
advantages
and it released an
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in their Improvement, all of us know that it takes
a
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big room in our life like mobile
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, laptops, computers etc. Another point of view
,
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is what technology provided
at
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transportation in the
last
years, there is
significantly
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increasing in electric
cars
numbers year by year. In the future it will not have been needed drivers for vehicles It will be
driverless
vehicles,
the
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only type of people that can
travelling
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inside will be passengers. With a sharp look,
driverless
vehicles have many
advantages
, one of them
is
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sharp
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reducing
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at
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the records of accidents, the
cars
will have sensors that
works
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with ultraviolet which will avoid accidents,
also
AI has a maximum level of safety and scientists will setup it with safety
first
role. The
cars
will have a specific time to go
to
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repair and it will take care of the age of the car and reduce the record of
the
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damaged
cars
.
On the other hand
, disadvantages will find with time passing, like the
driverless
bus
will
has
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a timetable and will work with a sharp hour it leaves at exactly what clock was
setup
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on it never been waiting for any passenger, another point that if someone going to leave the
bus
at
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station and changed his mind and decided to get out of the
bus
at another station the
driver less
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bus
was setup at specific stations and will not changing it until someone come and
change
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the
set up
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.
Finally
, I think that
advantages
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will outweigh the disadvantages
cause
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all the
advantages
will be solved after several years of searching and many experiments scientist
sill
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find the solution like the
invented
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the
driverless
they will make it
more and more better
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better and better
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