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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?

#cctv #cameras #fight #crime
As everyone is aware, crime has surprisingly escalated in modern times.
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 has an impact on the global economy
in addition
 to people. Governments are educating people about the predicament and how to handle it in order to control
this
 misbehaviour. "CCTV
cameras
" are one of the products that the government prioritises. I'll cover the advantages and disadvantages of adding
cameras
 in
this
 essay. One of the most significant resources in the modern period is technology. When debating whether or not to instal spy
cameras
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 our
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? Yes is the
first
 response that comes to mind. The benefit of having a camera is that we may record every action that occurs in our daily lives.
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, taking
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 can help us stop theft in an hour or keep a watch on all of our possessions, including our
automobile
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, jewellery, and more. Another drawback of having security
cameras
 in our homes, offices, or other locations is that they record every action we take.
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 time together in their home, but every aspect of
this
 is being recorded, which is inappropriate. Because
this
 pair might use blackmail to demand extortion money if that clip ends up in the hands of strangers. I will say that having
cameras
 is a great idea, but we must be conscious of what is being recorded in them or we must erase the clip, which could cause issues in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrent
  • CCTV (Closed-Circuit Television)
  • Evidence
  • Constant surveillance
  • Monitor
  • Privacy
  • Vandalism
  • Malfunction
  • Blackmail
  • Voyeurism
  • Surveillance
  • Maintenance
  • Conviction
  • Authorities
  • Public safety
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