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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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There is no doubt that the influence of immigration affects both communities, the homey they emigrate from and the community they move to. Even though, there are numerous reasons that make immigrants leave their motherland.
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consequences of immigration.
Firstly
, the main reason why people move to another state
to
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 search for
better
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 life and job vacancy.
However
, there is a lack of healthcare and work opportunities in their union. To illustrate, numerous Africans travel to France every year to find their crust of bread.
Moreover
, 90% of the national team of France are African immigrants. Another fact that cannot be ignored,
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 lack of education in the developed homelands where a number of their citizens leave
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to get
better
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 academic
degree
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 which can open the doors of new chances in multinational companies.
For example
, Ahmed Zewail who left Egypt to get
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master
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 and PhD
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from
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 America won the Nobel Prize after his academic
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.
As a result
 of immigration, there are a number of impacts that face their homey
in addition
 to the newest one.
Nevertheless
, the motherland would have a lack of hand workers and
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 of their educators.
Therefore
, there are no abundance
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 to build the community and develop it.
On the other hand
, from the economic perspective of the new nation, it gains a number of hard workers who contribute to its economy. To sum up, people move to another country to level up their living and build their qualifications.
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life after immigrating may not meet their expectations,
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 it’s vital to consider the consequences of your steps.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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