In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Living in a world having witnessed many events that might change a life utterly, the perception to get a

house

becomes a focal point to discuss. A

house

can be an asset or a liability, it depends on

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financial level.

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, no matter

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it a possession or hidden debt,

house

owners

seem to feel more secure and immersed when living in their own place. Having a

house

, especially in a society with constant changes, would provide

the

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a

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sense of stability for

owners

and guarantee that they can enjoy their own space. While the

one

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with a

house

do

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not have to divide their monthly budget for renting, those with

the

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lease still need to spend an amount of money to pay

rents

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rent

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; and

this

might put them into difficult situations if they can not properly manage

financial

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their financial

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capacity. Considering the state of society, fluctuated or not, monthly renting payments can rise unexpectedly, worst still, landlords might be

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, salary can not meet the rents, and these cases can only be solved by uprooting to other places, which causes many inconveniences. On contrary, even being unemployed or suffering ,

house

owners

still have a

house

as an asset,

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not pay for landlord every month, ensuring a decent life;

although

they can just remain

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a short period

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this

can not be seen in the lease. Buying a

house

enables

owners

to decorate and install necessary equipment without refraining

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from

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the

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renting one.

This

is because most

of

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the house

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house

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houses

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that

serve

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renting purposes are already shaped in a fixed shape and they are hardly allowed to change

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if any it might take a high cost to make up for. Whether buying or renting is better is still dependent on financial

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. To those with financial power, a

house

can be considered

as

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a

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real estate or an asset that can be used

in

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various purposes, modifying it to be a shop

for example

, and it can be easily sold if necessary. In

this

case, a

house

constitutes money

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set

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aside, but they still bring about many benefits.

However

, with many that do not have enough financial capacity or love changing, renting is the optimal choice. Buying a

house

requires a great deal for

mortgage

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a mortgage

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which, in

a

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research, is reported to cost a young 6-7 years to achieve

this

financial level and

then

they spend many more years

for

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paying

debt

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the debt

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. Making

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purchase

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while being not financially sufficient

also

comes hand in hand with many risks, which might crop out unprecedentedly, causing difficulties. In conclusion, having a

house

as a possession tends to offer more of a sense of security of enjoyment rather than renting in which payers

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a

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risk-taker. Home

purchase

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purchases

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, even though these benefits, should be made with consideration of financial capacity in a long run.