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Many companies sponsor sports to advertise their products or service. What advantages and disadvantages does this bring for the teams and individuals that these companies sponsor?

#companies #sponsor #sports #products #service #teams #individuals
The pie charts illustrate the data
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 two
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 mainly 1945 and 1995 regarding the highest level of education of females in
Someland
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Homeland
. After analysing the data, it can be clearly stated that there is an overall improvement in the education system for women in
Someland
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Homeland
 over these 50
years
. It is evident from the information that the percentage of
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 girls and
third grade
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class
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 was 35 each in 1945 which got diminished to zero in 1995.
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, there were no post-graduate women in
Someland
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Homeland
 till 1945,
however
, they occupied 20% of the population by 1995. It is surprising to see that all the females were at least studied till Year 6 by 1955. There was no change observed in the proportion of Year 9 girls over 5 decades. The education among year 12 girls increased approximately 4 times since 1945. There is a wild movement in
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 of women having
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 degree as the share went from 1% to 50% over these
years
. In the conclusion, we can say that there is a positive picture of the country being presented over a time span of 50
years
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sponsorship
  • brand visibility
  • financial backing
  • advertising
  • endorsement
  • commercial interests
  • over-commercialization
  • conflicts of interest
  • integrity of the sport
  • dependency
  • career opportunities
  • personal brands
  • facilities
  • retirement
  • performance pressure
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