countries are becoming more and more simlar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

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The diagram illustrates the
process
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of producing sugar from sugarcane. The
process
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involves seven steps of different lengths and types including growing, crushing, harvesting, purifying etc.
Firstly
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, the sugarcanes are farmed for a period of around 12 to 18 months.
This
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is the longest step in the whole
process
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. Once the crops get mature, they are harvested by farmers either manually or by using specialised machinery. In the
third
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step, the harvested sugarcanes are put into the crushing machine in order to extract juices from them. Fourth, the juices are
further
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purified using the limestone filter. The purified juice in the fifth step is put into a boiler where the contents are heated and
finally
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, after evaporation, the syrup is obtained. The syrup contains sugar crystals which are segregated using a centrifugation
process
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. Once that happened, the sugar is taken into the
last
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phase of drying and cooling to get ready for final use or to be sold in the markets.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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