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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter - Explain what happened to your watch - Describe your watch - Ask the manager to help you find it

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Dear sir or madam, I am your hotelʼs customer and I went
your
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 place with my family
last
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 week. I was so glad to your service. And your hotelʼs workers kindly each
clients
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client
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. But now I am writing
to
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apply
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this
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 request because I went
your
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to your
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 hotel with my family and for my necessary
works
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work
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 one week ago . After
that
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,that
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 my family and I came back
our
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to our
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 house .
Then
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 I started looking for my watch and I could not find it in our house . Suddenly I realized that I had untied it on your hotel table . It is
color
Wrong verb form
coloured
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 like
gold
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a gold
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 watch and
it
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its
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 numbers of the time are written in Roman numerals. I think it is in
box
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the box
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 . What I want to suggest is
return
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to return
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it
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toit
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 me .I will so happy if you bring
it
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forit
toit
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 me in the
first
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 few weeks. I think it is not
difficult
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a difficult
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 thing for your hotel service. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully Munisa Khamraeva Khamraeva Munisa
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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