The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems, and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. To what extent do you agree?

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whether administrations should allocate more funds

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global warming. And it has become a heated controversy. Most

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citizens

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the government definitely should do. Personally, I do agree

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undeniable fact that global warming is becoming the most serious problem compared with others.

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it already threatened national security for parts of

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early report from World Environment Institution, the raised temperature caused the melting of glaciers, obviously, it brought a threat

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countries. So, global warming is a more threatening problem.

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global environmental issues is beneficial for

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shortage of water;

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global warming that bring positive influence on

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environment at the same time.

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ordinary people lack professional knowledge and they cannot aware benefits of these

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if the local government implemented the policy that allocates money to global warming could

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, in a long term, there are tons of advantages. So I extremely support it.